Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Why my commercial should be put after the 3:00 news

Why put my commercial after the 3:00 news? I’ll tell you why you should put it. My product is fun for all ages, it springs up. First reason for putting my commercial after the 3:00 news is because, people will be informed about this new product and, can decide if they want to buy it or not. Second reason is because it is nice and short so people won’t be bored beging for the ending to come. Third reason for putting my commercial is because, many viewers might want to ask questions about this product. This is why my commercial should be put after the 3:00 news.

The first reason to pick my commercial is because it is so much better than rebok. These shoes spring up so high. Rebok can not beat this awsome product what so ever.Rebok can not even jump so high like our shoes.

    Another reason to put my commercial on the news is because it is 100% for kids. It has been tested from adults. In the shoes are a heater and a A.C. The A.C. is good for jogging and you feet are sweating. The heater is good for Winter time and your feet are freezing. These shoes are very attractive for anyone.

    The last reason for putting my commercial after the 3:00 news is because it is really easy to start it up. Just with one jump it start to jump on it’s own. They will be attractive to people who are lazy also. When you say higher it will jump higher. When you say lower it will jump lower. These are three reasons why my commercial should be put after the 3:00 news.

    These are reasons why my commercial should be put after the 3:00 news.  First one is because people will know about this product and the rating will be three times more. Second reason is because it is not to long not to short people from everywhere in the USA will enjoy watching my commercial. Third reason is because if they don’t be informed about product and our phone number they won’t be able to ask any questions. About 95% of the kids in the USA are begging their parents to buy this product. So please pick my commercial to put after the 3:00 news.

Wednesday, January 4, 2012

How I could have made the commercial better

I could of make it better by saying more scientific words. Show more shoes with springs maybe could of been more convincing to buy. I could of spoken a bit more louder so they could hear properly. I could of shown alot more hand movements. The rest of the commercial was good and didnt have to be changed. This is how Icould of make my commercial even better than before.